/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4469921
lol shut up you dumb nigger. you spam your shit threads every week after being told dozens of times to stop and post in the draw thread and you insist youre better than everyone. faggot

>thinly veiled flex
based

Ugly fucking lips
Leave the website if you dont like hostility

just make sure the shoulders have less width than the hips and you should be okay

>>4469867
Your gf is ugly.

>>4471042
sauce plz

>>4472057
Cameron Stewart

>>4469762
Who did this? I saw it on the Daily Story once of all places.

>>4469951
A lot of the time hatching is used as a way of indicating or reinforcing the shape and direction of the form. 90 degrees, especially when you are only using the two directions (and not more), among other things creates a feeling of a flat tone, like a cast shadow - where it is sometimes used to good effect to distinguish cast shadows from light and shade on forms.
Your teacher just sounds like he doesnt like the “look” of it. Others describe the effect of lesser angles as producing an unsightly “moire” effect.
Both opinions are arbitrary.
In complex images you need multiple strategies and should use them consistently.

>>4469833
You shouldn't if you're going for realism. Hatching like thins can work in some cases, like with a more graphical work, as you can see.

>>4469737
This is gonna sound really mean but this is the truth and if you won't do nothing about it you will never get anywhere with your art.
You are copying anime without understanding what you are doing
you are drawing without understanding your fundamentals
this is not a "you might want to learn "type of thing. You have to understand what you are doing to become better. pick up loomis or something

>>4469737
Just skimmed some of it. You lack fundamentals. The symbol drawing and the character design alone gives the impression that it was made by someone adolescent. Like the anon above said you aren't understanding what you are doing. I even see inconsistent simple mistakes like one of the character's arms being noticeably smaller than the other. You may have been told that you are talented and good at art, and At your age that might be true. But you have a lot to learn. Loomis is a good start. If you are too beginner to internalize Loomis here's how to improve drawing people.
Learn basic proportions: length of legs, length of arms, length of torso, size of head, etc. And keep forms consistent.
Learn basic foreshortening: overlapping limbs, limbs straight forward, etc. Its hard to get far without knowing how to forshorten. Manga, and fight scenes require it.
Reference a mirror: dont know how to draw a kick from memory? Don't copy other anime, preform the action in the mirror. Not getting a stretched forth hand correctly. Use a mirror.
That's just to start. Once you can do those things then go back to loomis or another good artist and learn more intermediate things.

Arent you forgetting about, you know, backgrounds??? Are all these people living in a white dimension world?

>>4469737
Ayayaya ya. Gonna be honest with ya.

This is pretty cringe, brah.

I only read the first chapter, since I din't find ch2 and I'm not gonna put in the effort to actually search for it.
But I was involuntarily cringing several times as I pushed through the first chapter. I can see you're heavily influenced by shonen fight mangas, you've basically reused a lot of common tropes without adding anything new or a different twist, just tired cliches. Nothing wrong if you want to do a fighting manga, but your not bring anything new to the table, in terms of both characters and story. You have the gifted and unbeatable but edgy mc who honestly felt a lot like a wish fulfillment/self insert. This whole first chapter felt like something a 14 year old kid would draw, thinking it's cool.

Now for the positive point, It's easy to follow and flows pretty natural between panels, so following the plot is easy. Though it's crude and lacking in the fight scenes, I like your art style and you've got a lot of potential for growth.
But if you want people to give you more feed back, then as another anon mention before, at least dump the first chapter here, or direct link your chapters, if you want people to give a shit.
I'm not gonna bash on you too much, if this is a passion project of your, then knock yourself out, just have fun, it's a good learning experience and keep working at it.

The eyebrows are pretty tight

not bad. i've tried to draw this pose before, and i know how ridiculous it is (mostly because araki based dio's pose on a female model). Starting with simple shapes like quadrilaterals for the back will probably improve the overall cohesion of the picture.

>>4469717
>>4469885
Go to the beginner thread

Do you do commissions

drew this last year around this time

underage
>>>/out/

Wait a second
This isnt r9k

>>4469602
Interesting... I should try dating female NSFW artists

>>4469810
Stop replying you idiot.
I wanted to post this on r9k.

>>4469824
I'm not the one posting on the wrong place and I am also not the one bumping the thread

>>4469602
>why is it that this strawman i made up is something i have a problem with?!?!?

you truly are woke, queen. men btfo

>>4469513

>>4469513
Last one

>>4469489
>Implying I'm not doing the first thing already
Corona fucked everything up and all I've done during the quarantine is draw.

>>4469586
What's the source nigga?

>>4471618
Use reverse image search, nigga.

It doesn't work like that, buddy.

I would then worry about what happens 2 months from now.

>>4469555
based

>>4469480
the top right head has so much soul it doesn't even look like loomis work but that midle one looks like a doll

>>4471577
all three are sketches from his imagination anyway.

>>4469480
Golden Age of illustration is in the past and no one need your illustrations for journals and ads now. So nope.

>>4470577
I know...

>>4470577
:^(

>>4476872
I'm actually kinda surprised, I got a warning in the past from a mod for post a SFW furry pic. it wasn't even cropped too, it was just sfw. I guess they don't care anymore? Or no one has reported the thread.

>>4477447
The rule got changed some time ago, now only furry porn is banned.

>>4469503
I would support this. I mean half of 4chan are secretly furfags after all. At least then we could tell people to post that shit on >>>/furry/

>>4477518
Maybe Moot will come back from the grave and give us a /fur/ Or gookmoot will do it as a joke, who knows.

>>4475777
thanks I'll have to work on that

>>4477159
Thanks man that means a lot. I really don't know how long its going to take me to get to that "next level", but I'm noticing that getting to the intermediate to "pro" step is the hardest. It's just mad grinding and sharpening fundamentals and anatomy to an absurd degree where you just know everything. It seems like I'm so close but I so fucking far away at the same time.

I like it! but would like it more if it was less sloppy

>>4469448
what kind of pen did you use?

>>4473198

>>4469448
11/10 GMI

>>4469448
really fuckin good/10

>>4474211
Me.

>>4473738
Based constructive advice

>do dab stuff to warm up
>also start watching dynamic sketching
>get to the texture part
>dab exercise tells you to autistically stare at textures
>peter's lesson tells you to just use whatever or even make shit up while following the idea of light to dark and detailed to loose
i dunno i've liked the structure of dab so far but dynamic sketching feels far more interesting to think about

>>4473125
Thanks

>>4474309
Drawing sentient beings is Haram. You'd feel more at home on >>>/gd/

>>4469241
it's fine. take a few days off and gather new energy. don't even think about drawing and it'll come back

>>4481347
im doing this and its not coming

help me anon

>>4481399
just give up and pay somebody else to draw your degenerate fantasies for you.

>>4471418
>the fun of it comes from drawing new things and learning
Are people who don't experience fun like this doomed to stay office drones who watch TV?

The last year or two I've basically just drawn when I feel like it.

My gains stagnated hard and I draw a lot less often, but I'm also a lot less stressed about it. When I was trying to do art daily I'd get really fucking worked up when I didn't know what to draw or couldn't put my ideas to paper.

>>4469583

Guts will drive his sword (cock) through Griffith's left eye. Then off to the real bad guys.

Btw great art looks great even in a thumbnail.

>>4469366
this

>>4469583
Looks really like an old engraving, awesome

>>4469207
and can you name good western artists? i want to see some
not trying to bait here just want to see western art

>>4469583
When he draws those long as fuck lines that are nearly perfect, does he use a fast pen stroke or slow and careful? It's hard to believe it would be a fast stroke considering how close together they are but slow strokes always look like shit. Maybe he used a tool to get such perfect hatching lines?

Man this board is hella dead

yes please

good thread

>>4472208
Very nice, love the style
>>4472223
Great legs and expression

>>4469187
Dumb toad poster.

>>4469187

>>4469187
Tod

>>4471853
Let us see. Legs are important.

>>4471473
You're welcome, Anon!

You don't have to draw porn to focus on the human body. Not everybody likes porn, I'm not much of a fan of it, but I'll still drawn non-porn nudes to help me improve. Maybe start somewhere more simple, like these shapes. Most things can be broken down into simple shapes or combinations of them after all.
When you start working with paper and pencil, try not to draw too small, use as much of the page as you can without going uncomfortably close to the edge. Also be light with your pencil so you can erase things easier, and try holding it at different angles when shading to get more of the graphite's surface against the paper.

>>4471393
go with the book first

>>4471955
Is this a drawing?

new thread
>>4471550
>>4471550
>>4471550
>>4471550
>>4471550
>>4471550

Make it just a side gig you know, not something like your main career goal. Just improve on your art as a hobby itself.

>>4469151
You can still draw if you have aphantasia, you'll just have to use more references or try to figure out other methods of constructing things that aren't visualizing them.

>>4469151
https://www.theguardian.com/lifeandstyle/shortcuts/2019/apr/10/aphantasia-why-a-disney-animator-draws-a-blank-on-his-own-creations

>>4469151
>I recently discovered I have Aphantasia

i recently discovered youre a moron

>>4469405
It's probably a good practice not to age up characters specifically to make lewds of them. Now if you write a story to go along with it then the public accepts it. Just don't ship them with an adult character that knew them as a child.

>>4469625
who cares

>>4469625
>don't age up characters to make lewds
based and lolicon pilled

>>4469625
God, these shit takes should’ve stayed on tumblr where it belongs. No one gives a shit about Chinese cartoons and comparing them to real life is fucking weird.

>>4469625
>Just don't ship them with an adult character that knew them as a child.
See, this is actually why I hate this. I get an age difference between years is a grey area, but saying this between two people that are similar age but both knew each other at childhood? By this logic every case of this is pedophilia because you're banging a woman/man that you have many years of memories of them underaged, which you're implying they are constantly thinking about when fucking each other over the age of 18. Hell most of these cases they fucked as teenagers thanks to hormones.

The point of this always is retarded. If the end receiver is getting off to the adult body that's literally all that matters and those people are pedos. It's the people that fap to underdeveloped bodies that are pedos.

>>4470423
The gesture means "from heart to sun". Do you have dextrocardia or something?

>>4469061
I'm more interested in learning to render like that in ink

>>4477805
>"from heart to sun"
Black sun lmoa

>>4477606
>>4477596
Who knew drawing was this fun!

>>4477936

>>4469048
One of the few good things that came out of the shithole known as /v/ in recent years. Glad I posted this image.

>>4469052
Shit, you might have been skullposting in my CV threads before the season 3 hit and it became a shitfest

Made In Abyss' OST is good
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aXFpZ8fBALc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CfIAGxs0uO0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKD-MVfC9Ag

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dEFcpyy_vq8

not only is the miami soundtrack liquid dope, each and every one of the artists featured is amazing on their own so give them a listen

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPxvTd_jCPQ

also young scrolls making juicy shit from TES game sounds