/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Neither.

It looks depressing as shit

>>5225331
every technical aspect on the paintover is correct, but yet it feels weird, maybe 2D is not meant to be bringed to 3d
?

>>5225344
Nah it's their shitty color choices

>>5225330
>>5225330
I don't know shit but Lilo looks sad as fuck

Lilo looks like a crackwhore after a 72 hour gangbang

it just looks waxy, like it would be greasy if i touched it

>>5225330
Top Lilo looks like she's thinking about the platoon buddies she watched die in Vietnam.

>>5225330
It's ok. Looks picture-book-esque.

>>5225330
Boring

>>5225330
the greenish tone on the skin (propably light bouncing from the tiles?) and the very pronounced eye bags make her look very unhealthy

>>5225330

The blues are wrong, should've used reds considering the skin colors.
The thing here is what are you trying to accomplish? Are you just adding an alternative light source? Or are you utilizing colors and shading to emphasize a mood?
With cartoons, the mantra to realize is that less is more. Cartoons aren't meant to replicate reality, but imitate it. Cartoons are about focusing on key features and letting the rest blur.

>>5225330
>cereal box drops shadow while being in the shadow
ngmi
also why the fuck would you use blue midtones on skin color when their skin is clearly red and the scene lighting indicates a warm yellowish/orange tone

>>5225669
the box is not totally in shadows you absolute fucking mongoloid
>>5225537
I agree to some extent
>>5225642
its a blueish tone, and the eye bags you are totaly right
>>5225658
based
Btw this is not my work, just found it on the internet

>>5225330
I thought she got a black eye at first

better or worse?

>>5225330
needless

>>5226770
Better.

>>5226791
>doesn't know what a study is
ngmi

>>5225330
>>5225344
>>5225465

It's that they are trying to do that iridescent color shit that every concept artist and their mother is doing nowadays.

It's muted here, but it's there when you look in the right spots. Like in the edge of the shadows, the palm of the guy, and the highlights on her arm and face.

>>5226819
dude what the fuck are you talking about? thats just bounce light and other very normal behaviours of light when hitting certain objects
this is why begs need to get their asses to read at least some basic shit before posting here, the Dunning Kruger is off the charts

>>5225330
Top has JUST vibes

>>5226825
I'm sorry. I didn't realize my skin turned rainbow-like when light bounces off of it. Or that the edges of shadows are also rainbows.

Holy fuck, you're retarded.

>>5226825

youre retarded as fuck

>>5226840
>rainbow
>is just one shade of desaturated skin tone
>he thinks the saturated band between light and shadow is something new
>rainbow
Anon, I...

>>5226840
>>5226843
I always kek at this terminal stage /beg/ness

>>5226819
>>5226825
>>5226840
>>5226843
>>5226845
>>5226848

all of you need to post your work, faggots

>>5226851
you already know me, sweetie

>>5226819
>confusing chromatic aberration meme with reflected light
REAL ngmi hours here tonight

>>5226874
Expecting retards to know what they are talking about on 4chan.

Real dumbass right here.

>>5226855
Unimpressive.

>>5226886
a statement like that requires work i'm afraid, or else you're just another stupid faggot

>>5226886
>unimpressive
Well knock our socks off with your work then

>>5225330
What is the point of that paintover?

>>5226917
what is the point of your post

>>5226917
Practice, is an already made drawing so no need of wasting time on doing one, mostly for color and light

>>5226931
also great social media fodder, win win

>>5226920
Fuck off
>>5226931
Thanks

>>5225330
So like you turned everything into ubernigger. And?

>>5226806
ok, its a needless study

>>5227040
Okay mongoloid

Neither. The lighting and shadows aren't done right. The hand takes up most of the piece and it's the most poorly done part. The lack of depth breaks it away from Lilo's space and throws off the whole interaction between characters. Needs more range in value. The pitch black sleeve is the most glaring part imo.

This isn't the worst thing ever tho, you can clearly tell what the artist is trying to do at least.